Peer Review

Peer Review was a little mediocre today. I have had better experiences. Last semester, since the students in our class were part of the same freshman learning community we were able to be a little more critical. I want people to be honest. I want to be told that there are holes in my paper and that I am not convincing. I want to be shown my weak points, I PROMISE I WON'T CRY! My topic was sharing an experience about me at a frat house. I was being hustled by an Indian guy who offered to have sex with me. I do not engage in sexual activity and when this happened, I was completely taken back. I want other people to share their experiences with me. I want to know if I am being too over the edge or oblivious to the world of college. Even though I feel like was not critiqued enough, I did receive some positive feedback. I was told that I had a good, attention-catching introduction and that the flow of my paper worked well. I would like to know how people that are not virgins feel about my paper. I know that is kind of awkward but I want to know if I was persuasive. If they felt like what I was saying was true.